What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
The piece of writing from your portfolio that was my favorite was "The Show Must Go On". Not only was this well written, it was deeply introspective. You were able to convey your own emotions in such a way that the reader could "feel" right along with you. It was very brave to share your personal feelings with such honesty and in a raw and uncut way that makes the reader really able to connect you.
What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
I like that you are able to find inspiration for your writing from your own experiences and that you are able to incorporate and illicit a wide variety of emotions as you vary your themes.
Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
You had excellent pieces focusing on the writing trait of voice. In addition to "The Show Must Go On", the "College Draft" essay was another example of using voice to really make that connection with the reader and draw them in to your story. Well done!
Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
A couple of things to focus on in the upcoming semester might include organization and proof-reading. I noticed times where you bring in a new thought or idea, but limit it to one sentence. Perhaps you could more fully expand in greater detail some of those key ideas.
Your writing shows tremendous growth over the past year. I am so proud of all your hard work and dedication! Cant wait for the next portfolio review!!
