Wednesday, January 27, 2016
If Only... Poem Final
If her pencil could dance across a page
drawing would impress them
If her fingers could travel down the scale
then maybe B followed by C would make them hum the tune
The talents possessed by all
were talents she did not carry
perhaps
If ears heard her words as a muse
instead of an untuned note
her throat wouldn't be the most sore in the room
It was strange, priorly,
the pencil didn't need to dance
she did
her fingers flipped through pages and pulled hair back
while humming any tune she pleased
the talents she possessed
were strong enough for the walls of her cornered home
but in society
they would falter and weaken
by the lips and deeds of Another
The world approached her differently than the one she had known
the pencil moving instead of her feet
was promising
the tune the piano sung instead of her own
was engaging
but not to him.
every movement, hum, and whisper
was promising, engaging, and captivating
the talents she did not carry
were talents he did not find a need to be possessed.
So he refused to allow her words to fade to a whisper
he tempered them, mastered them,
even though, she had rejected him in the worst sense, he still thought the tune her lips
carried were ardent phrases
sweet and refined
sweet and refined
even if only to him
alas, the words led to a
tear her pride,
but it relieved him of her prejudices
and although it felt damaging,
it was
Till this moment she never knew herself
Friday, January 22, 2016
Allusion Poem Draft 1
If her pencil could dance across a page
drawing would impress them
If her fingers could travel down the scale
then maybe B followed by C would make them hum the tune
The talents possessed by all
were talents she did not carry
perhaps
If ears heard her words as a muse
instead of an untuned note
her throat wouldn't be the most sore in the room
It was strange, priorly,
the pencil didn't need to dance
she did
her fingers flipped through pages and pulled hair back
while humming any tune she pleased
the talents she possessed
were strong enough for the walls of her cornered home
but in society
they would falter and weaken
by the lips and deeds of Another
The world approached her differently than the one she had known
the pencil moving instead of her feet
was promising
the tune the piano sung instead of her own
was engaging
but not to him.
every movement, hum, and whisper
was promising, engaging, and captivating
the talents she did not carry
were talents he did not find a need to be possessed.
So he refused to allow her words to fade to a whisper
he tempered them, mastered them,
and
they carried ardent phrases that were a fine tune
even if only to a few
alas, the words led to a
tear her pride,
but it relieved him of her prejudices
and although it felt damaging,
it was
Till this moment she never knew herself
Friday, January 15, 2016
Monday, January 11, 2016
Viva La Vida: Song Allusion
Jordan and Bri
I used to rule the world
Seas would rise when I gave the word
Now in the morning I sleep alone
Sweep the streets I used to own
I used to roll the dice
Feel the fear in my enemy's eyes
Listened as the crowd would sing
Now the old king is dead long live the king
One minute I held the key
Next the walls were closed on me
And I discovered that my castles stand
Upon pillars of salt and pillars of sand
I hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing
Roman cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror, my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
For some reason I can't explain
Once you'd gone there was never
Never an honest word
And that was when I ruled the world
It was a wicked and wild wind
Blew down the doors to let me in
Shattered windows and the sound of drums
People couldn't believe what I'd become
Revolutionaries wait
For my head on a silver plate
Just a puppet on a lonely string
Oh who would ever want to be king?
I hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing
Roman cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror, my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
For some reason I can't explain
I know St Peter won't call my name
Never an honest word
But that was when I ruled the world
Oh oh oh oh ohh oh [x5]
Hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing
Roman cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror, my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
For some reason I can't explain
I know St Peter won't call my name
Never an honest word
But that was when I ruled the world
The song represents allusion directly to the bible, and the men who fought in the crusades. It reflects specifically on religion because it is such a controversial topic about the rise and fall of many men. the song is about a king who loses power "the higher you are, the harder you fall." Feeling that even though you are faithful, there are people that will let you down. "I know St. Peter wont call my name." In the bible Jesus was faithful to Peter, yet in the face of adversity, Peter didn't call his name, but denied him and say he didn't know him. Therefore, Coldplay linked this song reminds us that through religion and warfare, we as humans we are very vulnerable with our spiritual beliefs and trust and faith is fragile.
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